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Got so fucking much practice to do -.- This is nowhere near what I want... But hey...
Guess that's what practice is all about.
I'll go for breasts practice tomorrow... That's gonna be even trickier...
Fate out!
Guess that's what practice is all about.
I'll go for breasts practice tomorrow... That's gonna be even trickier...
Fate out!
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As the hips are the primary focus, they appear comfortably accurate, reasonable for your own subtle artstyle. A sensible technique, comparing the proportion of the hips to other body parts such as the thighs, waist and especially the shoulders. However, on #5, the lines branching from the lower back across the hips stand out to me; they pronounce the bend too much. Try cutting those a fraction whenever making a similar pose and angle, see if it's a better, worse or neutral result not only in accordance to aesthetics, but also what feels right for you and your artstyle.
All in all, it's a very well-done sketch. I hope this critique helps, what little it contains, as there isn't too much to go off a sketch and I'm not an avid artist myself..