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Hips Practice 01

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Got so fucking much practice to do -.- This is nowhere near what I want... But hey...

Guess that's what practice is all about.

I'll go for breasts practice tomorrow... That's gonna be even trickier...

Fate out!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

As the hips are the primary focus, they appear comfortably accurate, reasonable for your own subtle artstyle. A sensible technique, comparing the proportion of the hips to other body parts such as the thighs, waist and especially the shoulders. However, on #5, the lines branching from the lower back across the hips stand out to me; they pronounce the bend too much. Try cutting those a fraction whenever making a similar pose and angle, see if it's a better, worse or neutral result not only in accordance to aesthetics, but also what feels right for you and your artstyle.

All in all, it's a very well-done sketch. I hope this critique helps, what little it contains, as there isn't too much to go off a sketch and I'm not an avid artist myself..