Sheryl's Day Off (WIP)

Personally, I enjoy a lot of the shading in this piece. The lighting works well to portray her overall from the gray flat backgrounds. The only major issue is the positioning of the character, seeing how her back is twisted around with a full view of her crotch. It doesn't seem right. It almost looks painful at most I figured the hips would be higher or you wouldn't be able to see the crotch that much, just a pure booty shot. perhaps if the head was smaller just a bit so it doesn't look at disproportionate compared to the distance of the table. Even though this is a work in progress, I figured she also is a bit more messy like a hand print of grease on her ass cheek. Considering just small droplets of oil on her breast and right cheek. The inner line work is smooth, but once you get to the border lines around her and her hand, it looks rushed. I see a lot of potential in this image, but the angling and dimensions of the figure are needing to be worked on most. I do enjoy the style and the slight monotone of red, as seen with the visor around her eyes. Overall, I give this WIP a 3.5 out of 5.